From
time to time one or few of them would stand up and step outside to throw up.
A
lonely drum marked the rhythm, sounding over the silence.
The
smoke lingered in the air, filling the hut with the hut with the smell of
tobacco that the kuraka had used to purify them all.
It
was time to spirit travel, all the men could participate but not all of them
would see the visions.
The
taste was bad and made him want to empty his stomach together with the other
men.
The
time flew, or stretched, moving in waves and sideways.
The
smoke in front of him formed the sinuous body of a great dappled boa.
It
moved its head, smelling the air with its tongue and fastened its eyes into the
prince.
-
Amarun, my brother, it said, the man who walks in two legs with my own name.
The
prince kept his silence; it was the time for the vision to speak.
-
What do you want, the boa asked, what is the secret desire of your heart? It is
not to free your father but a certain flower.
-
Sisa, the snake slithered, flower, she is what you long for. But is she worth
losing you father?
The
prince did not answer, he knew the snake was tempting him, but he also did not
know the answer.
The
boa’s head stood still and it watched him, it turned its head over to see him
with one eye and then with another.
Finally
it crawled over his shoulders and settled around his neck.
Its
tongue touched prince’s ear and whispered secrets to him.
For
a long time I have longed to see the end of the arrogance and stupidity of the
jaguar men. For
ages have I dreamed of the end to the vulture men’s cruelty and greed.
Is
it time now, the boa slithered, are you the one who will free us all?
Still
the prince would not utter a word.
- We
are a strong people, proud people, with countless numbers of warriors, the
snake glided across his naked waist.
- But
we are reduced to hiding, the boa’s eyes burned with anger, holing up to
protect us and our children from the vulture men and their talons.
- They
eat us, the snake voice was filled with rage, they devour us, throw our skins
and bones up and feed us to their disgusting chicks.
- I
will help you, the boa hissed; we will free your father and kill the vultures
and jaguars until there is not one of them left. But you will have to promise
me something.
- You
will have to make a pact with me, the boa stared the prince to the eyes, you
will promise us that you shall always let us live in the rivers and the
jungles. Even when we tax you your children and your animals, even when we occasionally
kill one of you. You will leave us alone and respect us as the owner and the
wise men of the forest and the river, as the boa people, your brothers and
sisters. And to seal this pact, you will marry one of my sisters.
The
prince bowed his head, was Sisa more important than his father, what was the
secret desire of his heart.
- I
shall make the pact with you, he answered, and together we will rescue my father
and his men.
-
And destroy the vultures and jaguars, the snake ended the wow.
For
a while it basket with happiness on prince’s shoulders but then it was time for
it to leave.
Little
by little it became smoke and floated in the air, escaping from the hut’s door
to the air outside.
- I
have seen a vision, the kuraka announced; the boa people will help us. Tomorrow
they shall arrive to our village so we can plan together but tonight we will
feast!
To read the second part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 2
To read the third part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 3
To read the fourth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 4
To read the fifth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 5
To read the twelth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 12
To be continued...
This is the eleventh part of the story.
To read the second part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 2
To read the third part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 3
To read the fourth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 4
To read the fifth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 5
To read the sixth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 6
To read the seventh part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 7
To read the eight part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 8
To read the ninth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 9
To read the tenth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 10
To read the twelth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 12
Great imagery in this part 11 of The Queen With Frozen Heart Story. Thank you for another enjoyable read.
ReplyDeleteThe hut looks awesome.. I really like how you tell the story and then show the pictures..
ReplyDeleteLove the imagery here. You write very nicely.
ReplyDeleteLove storytelling with pictures. Brings it that much more to life.
ReplyDeleteyou are so creative in your storytelling and finding the perfect pictures that match.
ReplyDeleteMichelle F.
I love your posts. I'm ready for the next part!!! Your storytelling is just awesome.
ReplyDeleteI would ABSOLUTELY freak out if I saw that snake anywhere near me! LOL... It would make for some great entertainment!
ReplyDeleteOh wow, that snake is some scary business. I'm following and reading your stories and enjoying them everyday. Thank You
ReplyDeleteThank you for another great installment to the Queen's story!
ReplyDeleteJust the though of making a pact with a snake is too reminiscent of Adam and Eve to sit well with me. I think he's gonna be in trouble!
ReplyDeleteThis was a great story, I need to go back read the rest of them in order.
ReplyDeleteI don't know about that pact. This could backfire!
ReplyDeleteYou're a great storyteller can wait for the new posts, I wonder if the snake/boa people will eventually betray them or hold to the pact
ReplyDeleteThe images are just STUNNING! Although that snake image made me a little nervous LOL
ReplyDeleteI love the images this week! Makes it much easier to picture the story.
ReplyDeleteYou make it so very interesting. I love reading it. I actually dislike snakes very much so the pictures freak me out. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteNice story! Love how you paint things with your words and then show the pictures.
ReplyDeleteOh My! That snack is huge. Great story..thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI love your storytelling too, and your pictures are worth a thousand words!
ReplyDeleteYet another great installment. Thanks for sharing. Great photos!
ReplyDeletegreat part of the story! love the pictures. that snake is huge!
ReplyDeletethis is beautifully written :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing! Although, I kind of had to skip through the snake pictures fast!! Beautiful photos and story! <3
ReplyDeleteYour such a great story teller, amazing! That snake looks scary though!
ReplyDeleteGreat images and story! I'm not sure if it was a good idea to have a pact. Let's see what the next part brings.
ReplyDeleteCool story!
ReplyDeleteWow. Amazing!
ReplyDeleteYou have such a gift! I feel transported to another world!
ReplyDeleteThe snake made me forget what I read lol so had to read read and skip the snake part I am chicken
ReplyDeleteI loved it and am wanting more!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great way to share a story and images! Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteI love the way this was written out - thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteLovely writing!
ReplyDeleteI wonder what ayawaska taste like? I am so scared of snake, just looking at the photo makes me cringe.
ReplyDeleteTheir is artistry in a way that you manage to create visual images thru your words and the inspirational value of this makes this a good story. keep it up :)
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