The prince had even gotten used to his mother’s sorrow. Just like the
rest of the land. The people have come to accept it, to treat it like it was
the most natural thing to have a queen that would never smile or laugh. And
while the prince grew up and came closer to his adulthood, it was a rare time
his mother would smile even to him, or laugh at something he would say or do.
She was never cruel, and had nothing of evil, so even the land had come
to terms with her frozen heart. After all, the land knew the winter and cold,
it was used to winter’s ice and the spring’s thaw and the coldness of the high
mountain peaks. And it knew that the sun would always come out and unfroze
everything again. It was just matter of time until the queen’s heart would be
unfrozen, at least from the earth’s viewpoint. What would it have more than
time, so the earth waited and while it waited it let the winter’s lethargy come
over the all land and everything and everyone who lived there.
Only the prince was free on this enchantment, it was like in him the
blood flowed with the spring’s strength while the other’s moved around at the
tired pace of the winter. For him the time moved on and days passed, as the
rest slumbered on in their charmed existence.
It did not bother the prince, because he knew that it made everything
easier for his mother. Only thing that saddened him was that his mother did not
seem to understand how much he had grown. He would return from his wondering in
the forests and the mountains, to find that the queen thought that only a night
or two had passed when for the prince it had been weeks or even months. Finally
he saw that the time in the castle had practically stopped while his run ahead.
But he knew the secret; it was only to allow him more easily to disappear to quest
for his father.
On a dark moonless night, when the talk of his upcoming manhood and
driven him to search for refuge in the mountains beyond the forests, he sat
under a tree. He sat, his hand buried in his bears fur and listened to the rain
around them. The earth under them and leaves above them were dry, just as he
had asked. And because it was a mild night and not a very cold one, he had not
started a fire. His certainty made the earth smile, how young was he, how sure
of himself.
Prince visited the castle and his mother for the last time. He sang to
her once more, whispered his goodbyes to her ear, promising to return swiftly
and left. Away he wandered, further and further towards the north. During the
nights he could hear a bird calling; it was Iluku, calling for her lost lover,
the moon. Sad was the birds song as it gazed the shining moon.
Even though he walked through the days, taking longer and longer steps,
he did not grow weary. It was like the land came to meet him halfway, the tree
branches moved so not to bother him and a place was cleared for his feet. When
it was necessary the earth would rotate a little bit faster, so when he landed
his foot he was a mile further on the road.
It was hard to sleep without feeling tired and on a many night he stayed
awake, listening to Iluku’s call. She would only sing when the moon was
shining, Killa, Killa, Llullukilla, she would cry, moon, moon, sweet moon.
During the moonless nights the forest would be silent around him; respecting
the only time the two lovers had to meet again. On the moonless sky the stars
shone bright and the prince could see Kuyllur, the wise brother, shining bright
and announcing the morning to come.
The echoes of the bird's call vanished and a beautiful woman with long
black hair dancing on her back stepped out of the forest. She was holding hands
with a tall and handsome warrior. The prince stirred, the stranger looked so
much like his father that he almost called him out loud. Then he saw the man
kiss the woman and knew it could not be the king, his father. Because he would
never kiss another woman besides the prince's mother.
The prince stirred as the man and the woman gazed each
other to the eyes and talked in low voices. He warned his bear not to scare the
couple. So intent they were in each other that neither of them stirred when the
prince and the bear left their places under the tree. Slowly they crept on,
intent on hearing what they talked about.
- Oh, how I miss you my
lord, the woman would sight, I cry for you, Killa, throughout the night when I
see you so high above me.
- And I watch you down
below me, the man would answer, and curse the moment, I had to flee and leave
you behind. How cruel the destiny to give us only the moonless nights to spend
together.
Prince nodded, it was as he
had known in his heart. It was the moon, Killa, himself, with his lover, Iluku,
who was enchanted to live her days and nights as the enormous bird. Crying out
for her distant lover and becoming woman again only on the night when the moon
was hidden and could walk on the earth again.
To be continued...
This is the fifth part of the story.
To read the second part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 2
To read the third part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 3
To read the fourth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 4
To read the sixth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 6
To read the seventh part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 7
To read the eight part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 8
To read the ninth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 9
To read the tenth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 10
To read the eleventh part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 11
To read the twelth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 12
To read the twelth part, go to The Queen With The Frozen Heart 12
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ReplyDeleteWonderful story and pictures to match. Michelle @ http://www.writer-way.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteDon't forget to link up to your past chapters. I would like to hear more about the carnival parade that the pictures are actually from.
ReplyDeleteThank you for reminding me about the links, Lindsey. The last pictures and the first one are from Tena's festivities. There are carneval floats, a beauty pageant and concerts to commemorate the date of foundation of Tena every year.
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ReplyDeleteMichelle F.
I always enjoy your stories. You have me intrigued.
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ReplyDeleteAll the pictures are from here Ecuador, Krystyn. The mountain is Cotopaxi and the rest of the pictures are from here Tena, in the Amazon.
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ReplyDeleteI love the pictures that go along with the story, too!
Thank you, Kayla. I'm very glad to hear that, and also that you enjoyed the story!
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DeleteThe mountains look beautiful! I would love to travel there.
ReplyDeleteThe Ecuadorian women are very beautiful and the country is so nice, lots of nice things to see. Thanks for your story it's beautiful.
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ReplyDeleteI totally love your photos. The ladies are all beautiful too.
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ReplyDeleteLove the photography. It's so cool to see people in countries other than my own.
ReplyDeleteGreat photos, Joanna. Is that a holiday or a special festival in Ecuador?
ReplyDeleteThe festival pictures are from annual festival's for Tena. It's for the foundation day and it is celebrated every year in November with carnival floats, beauty pageant, concerts and other activities.
DeleteI hope to read the part that the queen would learn to smile again.
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